Monday, September 29, 2014

The Narrator

Hi everyone! I have something a little different for you today. It's another audio caption... But this time, it isn't a recording of a previous caption, this is new one I wrote specifically to be an audio caption. Enjoy!









Also, just thought I'd mention that my ebook is now available on Amazon

14 comments:

  1. Very cute

    A computer virus that sends you to the diaper dimension...where do i buy a copy of that :D

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  2. Very clever :)

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  3. I'll be honest, I'm not a fan of this narrator's voice. Call me a hater, but I just like your other content better PP and I feel it's necessary I voice some constructive criticism

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  4. Ditto. The voice feels like that of a chipmunk.

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  5. I am afraid I have to agree, there is just something about the voice that feels off, like its trying to be too sweet/cute. Again, constructive criticism, but your other content does feel better

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  6. The other narrations sounded to forced and not-made-for-voice....however this Narration it is clear that the girl is very excited! And the narrator got really into it...So I enjoyed it a lot! I think if you do narrations making a story special for them is SUPPPER FUN! =D Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!

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  7. I thought that it was a clever play on the format. Always glad to hear of any return to the diaper dimension.

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  8. The mic quality is killing me on this one.

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  9. Long_Rifle here:

    I usually look for stories there by using the tag abdl. Your story doesn't pop up unless you search for your name. If you can, try to see how to get that tag. You'll sell say more!

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    1. I don't believe there is any way for me to control tags on stores other than Lulu. I'm not seeing any way, at least. Maybe for any further publications, I'll do Amazon separately.

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  10. I long for another story like Lauren and Holly. One of the all time classics.

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  11. Great story! I love her being stuck in the DD!

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  12. Hi, Princess and sorry it has taken me so long to comment. I liked the story. It did remind me of the meta-twist of three horror movies: a 1970s film called THE SENTINEl, and more frequently, FREDDY'S NEW NIGHTMARE and John Carpenter's IN THE MOUTH OF MADNESS. The narrator has to tell the story, over and over again, in order to keep a great evil at bay...unfortunately for them, they become part of the story with each telling. Hmmm...is it also shades of "Hotel California"? We can check out anytime we like...but we can never escape the Diaper Dimension!

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  13. Whoops. Typo above: Should have read: "and more recently..." Speaking of those two films, and if anyone wants to check them out: NIGHTMARE was released in 1994, and IN THE MOUTH OF MADNESS (a straight-up Lovecraft tribute) was released in 1995. -Friendly Neighborhood Former Film Critic Tye

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